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Prologue to Life Isn't Always Perfect
Prologue
“If you really loved me, you wouldn’t hit me.” I said trying to hold back my sobs. It wasn’t really working. He hit me, knocking me on the ground. That one blow making me bleed so much that I am dizzy.
“Please, I need you. I just, I, I have a lot of pressure on me right now. With all my final exams. I’m a junior, I have to prepare for being a senor.” He went on and on as my vision blurred. I have to get out of here. I don’t want to pass out and leave him responsible for taking me to the hospital.
“I’m sorry, but…I have to go. I can’t do this. I’m soo sorry.” I saw the hurt look on his face before I turned around and tried to run off.
Would you read this? I have a lot of it done but I want to know if this sound good.
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It sounds good as a teaser for a book. Not something I would read. I've read books about abuse before, like "This Charming Man", by Marian Keyes, so not really another. |
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Is it going to have a "happy" ending? People will be more likely to read something if things turn out okay, or good, in the end, even if it's not perfect, for everyone. |
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Yeah, it will have a happy ending. |
sounds good